hello good people of Earth ~giggles~
Okay, I’ll be serious.
Have you read chapter six of White Swans A Regency World on Wattpad? The chapter introduces my friend Jillian and shows how she ended up in the fishbowl world of Regency. annamaria thinks the chapter is fine, I’m trying to tell her the beginning is not an attention grabber and she needs to do some revamping before publication. Could you please read the chapter and leave comments on Wattpad to tell her how you feel about it?
It would really help my case if you read it and left her a comments about what you liked, didn’t like, what was missing for you, or what ever you felt. Come on people, I need amo here.