I’ve gone back to Critiquecircle and have submitted the first 900 words of White Swans A Regency World. So far, I’ve realized, from the comments received, I need to make some major changes to the beginning of the story. It’s been an eye-opener. I’ll be combing through the second part, the introduction of Jillian, also and making needed changes.
I’ve decided to put the end of the novel through the critique process on Critiquecircle before I ever send it to my editor, The more people see it the better idea I will have on how it will be received. I’ve posted several chapters on Wattpad, but people have not left comments, so I consider that a failure.
Right now I’m working on the second round of edits for Incantation Paradox. Hopefully, I get this one right.
That’s all for now, talk to you later.