From annamaria’s Desk

I’ve gone back to Critiquecircle and have submitted the first 900 words of White Swans A Regency World. So far, I’ve realized, from the comments received, I need to make some major changes to the beginning of the story. It’s been an eye-opener. I’ll be combing through the second part, the introduction of Jillian, also and making needed changes.

I’ve decided to put the end of the novel through the critique process on Critiquecircle before I ever send it to my editor, The more people see it the better idea I will have on how it will be received. I’ve posted several chapters on Wattpad, but people have not left comments, so I consider that a failure.

Right now I’m working on the second round of edits for Incantation Paradox. Hopefully, I get this one right.

That’s all for now, talk to you later.

About annamaria

Although born in the United States, Annamaria Bazzi spent a great deal of her childhood in Sicily, Italy, in a town called Sciacca. Italian was the language spoken at home. Therefore, she had no problems when she found herself growing up in a strange country. Upon returning to the states, she promised herself she would speak without an accent. She attended Wayne State University in Detroit Michigan, where she obtained her Bachelor of Science in Computers with a minor in Spanish. Annamaria spent twenty years programming systems for large corporations, creating innovative solution, and addressing customer problems. During those years, she raised four daughters and one husband. Annamaria lives in Richmond Virginia with her small family where she now dedicates a good part of her day writing.
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