Talk about putting things into practice!
annamaria took off like a jack-rabbit making changes to the beginning of White Swans after reading some of the comments made on Critiquecircle yesterday and today. She didn’t just change the beginning, my introduction, but she went forward and changed chapter six, Jillian’s introduction. Boy! She’s on a roll.
Now I hope she’ll go back to the edits of Incantation Paradox so this thing can get off the ground and closer to publication.
I’m getting so excited!